The Dragon's Queen 2 Blurb

 

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Princess Sara is ready to return and bring much-needed reformation to her nation. However, while she has been away learning the truth about herself and her people, everything changed. Evil didn't wait for Princess Sara's reformation and has brought murder and conflict to the peaceful nation of Rishona. With the help of the dragon, Draco, and David the giant, Princess Sara must find a way to remove those who are willing to do anything to gain power. Thus begins the struggle of the Dragon's Queen for control of her kingdom, because if you want to bring change, you've got to live long enough to do it. 

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Princess Sara is ready to return and bring much-needed reformation to her nation. However, evil didn't wait for Princess Sara's reformation and has brought murder and conflict to the peaceful nation of Rishona. With the help of the dragon Draco and David the giant, Princess Sara must find a way to remove those who are willing to do anything to gain power. The struggle begins because if Sara wants to bring change, she's got to live long enough to do it.  

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#1  In a world of talking animals, danger is coming. Max is left for dead. Link and Jezreel are secretly sent to discover it. Destiny brings Max and Link together in a place of peril, and they will discover an evil that is not supposed to exist. Their experiences will test them, and they will ask themselves, “Can faith triumph when everything goes wrong?” and “Can you stand for right when you are all alone?”

#2 An accident returns the memories of a lonely talking elephant named Max, but now he has a choice. Take the dangerous journey to reunite with his family, or first seek out those non-talking elephants who have cared for him. Confused about life, Max decides to trust the Creator and do what is right. He is joined by Link, a speaking otter, on a quest to find the group of non-speaking elephants that helped Max. The journey takes them to places they never dreamed of and carries them off to an evil that is not supposed to exist.  Max must ask himself, “Can faith triumph when everything goes wrong? And do you stand up for what is right even when you are all alone?”